The article seems to have been hastily written/edited. For example, "There was a wedding that I had attended of one of our staff's son. There was no doubt that the gift we had contributed for would be signed from all of us as Team Jairam" sounds more like a casual conversation. Some editing here would not have been out of place ! A third person account would have resulted in a more sober tone, instead of the first person or conversational tone that pops up, glaringly so, in parts of the article. While it is good to be highlighting publications/accomplishments/awards etc., not doing so in the right (modest ?) manner can be jarring to the typical reader, thereby giving a negative impression instead of a positive one !